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yahnree

yahnree

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  • yahnree
    yahnree2 years ago
    respondió a Fallency

    Thanks for the review! I truly appreciate it. ❤️

  • yahnree
    yahnree2 years ago
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    I find the story interesting! When Jenny’s backstory was shown, I find it quite sad. Being independent at a young age and not growing in the presence of a biological family can have an impact to a person, even if it’s in real life. I’ve read several chapters, and Gabriel being a part of Jenny’s life from years back is a big mystery, and the curiosity that it gives makes me want to read further (and I will). I’m sure more interesting events will unfold in the next chapters. Looking forward to it! <3

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  • yahnree
    yahnree2 years ago
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    This part makes me curious! Can't wait to find out who this is. <3

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  • yahnree
    yahnree2 years ago
    Publicado por

    I like how Alex is motivated to become king. It shows the character's strong determination to achieve what he wants. This story partly reminds me of ATLA. There are a few missed punctuations and repeated words, but I'm sure that it'll be great as the story unfolds. ✨

  • yahnree
    yahnree2 years ago
    respondió a IceFontana18

    Thanks for the review! ❤️ I'll look up my minor errors and I appreciate that you pointed out its strength and room for improvement. It'll help me know how I can improve my work. 😊

  • yahnree
    yahnree2 years ago
    Publicado por

    In the first few chapters, I've already seen how the author reveals the kind of world the non-human characters have little by little. I find it intriguing, because I saw the details of how they looked like, and it leaves me imagining how the characters look like. Well done! I'm sure that there will be more interesting events. Hoping for the best for your work! 👏

  • yahnree
    yahnree2 years ago
    respondió a Elona_Alone

    Thanks for the comment! I appreciate it. 😊

  • yahnree
    yahnree2 years ago
    Publicado por

    At first I found it strange that, 'wait, there's no groom, just a wheelchair' but that sense of mystery is catchy. The protagonist had a rough family events, turning her to make big decisions in one go (signing without reading). I find it interesting because the further events are intriguing. I'll keep reading! ❤️