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Honestly, I don't understand the 4 stars reviews. This is pure masterpiece. I actually liked everything. Story telling, characters, the plot, no mistakes. It's a lovely book probably written by an amazing person. Please keep writing! I haven't read many books on the website as I am too focused on my novel, but this is the best one so far.
Nice idea you got there which got me hooked instantly! A bit too many mistakes for my like and the story feels a bit rush. Please include more description, your story barely started. Leaving that to the side, the idea is great with HUGE POTENTIAL. Please update it asap and revise the chapter before posting it.
Good plot with interesting development. It gets better and better as you progress through chapters. Please revise your own work by double checking it once you finished a chapter, there are some grammar mistakes that I am not fond of. Continue with the amazing work and be a bit more patient as you go through it
more attention please