I’m a new light novel writer, and this is my first attempt at a Love/Romance novel titled "Heart of Cherry Blossoms".
I may not know everything about writing yet, but I poured my heart into this story. I truly hope you enjoy it! ~~ o( ̄▽ ̄)ブ
If you enjoyed it, I would greatly appreciate a positive review! If not, I welcome your feedback and suggestions for improvement. Your thoughts mean a lot to me!
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Overall, the story was enjoyable, but there’s one minor issue I noticed. In certain places, the absence of commas made the flow a bit unclear. For readers who are newer to novels, this might create a sense of uncertainty in understanding. I came across this while reading for inspiration for Chapter 8 of my novel, Beyond Imagination: Journey to the Dark.