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NormalHane

NormalHane

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Hello I am a new writer feel free to point out my mistakes.

2022-08-07 Se unióGlobal
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  • NormalHane
    NormalHane6 months ago
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    I think the author deleted my previous review or the website had a problem so I will write it again. I think the main character is not even loyal to himself, he is with other women behind the back of the woman he sees as his only family and apologizes to her for this, I am not against harem novels, but the inconsistency of the characters made me want to stop reading. Have a good time for those who want to read it.

  • NormalHane
    NormalHane6 months ago
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    First of all, the absence of spelling mistakes visibly increases the quality of the novel, but for me the quality of the writing does not compensate for the other things. Who in their right mind would take stupid women who act like idiots in a zombie apocalypse and can't even control their emotions, especially Elena, the apocalyptic character. Even though the main character and Elena have had very bad things in the past, the stupid main character only pretends to be smart and takes her with him after 4 chapters, which is nonsense in itself. I'll leave it here, I wish good reading to those who will continue reading.