Thank you, i don't really speak french, but yeah more fuel give more momentum! élan!

Wow a hard criticism, well i'am first time writer i write that under the synopsis, sorry for you inconvenience, but i'am not gonna change that i do it my way.

that sound to much for me XD

he was raised in proper family, with proper education., sorry for you inconvenient XD

yeah sorry for that, iam new to this stuff, there is nothing in this dashboard, just some undo and redo button, i will edit it fast.

okay thanks for the advice, i will try it later

maybe i will spice it up with some romance, idk its my first time writing some stuff, and iam not really good in relationship department, sorry

i mean he just sitting there, in dim room wait to be pulled over, he's like blank canvas :P