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I personally think it is not your usual cliché dangling around the hooks for you to grab. It's just creative with a great flow that won't consist any gap holes. Even the first chapter itself, I can tell it is going to be a hell of a ride! One of the must reads! 🌟

Of course, you better write more 😌✨

It started off with a great thesis that has blanketed throughout the story, the very first line has gotten readers curious of what would happen next. The diversity between the male lead and the female lead was impressive- one huge and scary looking, yet well-mannered, while the other was small and frail, yet firm. It was a good contrast among the main leads and it depicts an interesting pair; a tint of cliché and originality to create this masterpiece.

The opening itself has potential- it’s in good flow, direct and straight to the point. You can tell what is going on right away with no doubt. Then comes to the storyline, which is smooth like butter. It has a whole picture of what is happening. The author loves using visualisation in her stories for audiences themselves to picture and she does it well. [img=recommend][img=recommend]