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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    respondió a Drei05

    i just read the first chapter and the story is interesting. i like your cover too.

    The Extra's Dominance
    Fantasía · Drei05
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    respondió a Arlemit

    i read the first chapter and wow!

    Nameless King
    Fantasía · Arlemit
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Publicado por

    [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] this romance story is well written, i like the female characters, the conflict needs development, and i want to know if the ending will be sad or happy

    Story close
    Adolescente · Account_nolonger
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    respondió a Account_nolonger

    Thank you for taking the time to read[img=recommend]

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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Publicado por

    I read the first chapter, and I knew this would be a great story. I like the way the author explains it. The story flows and builds well. Only a minor grammatical error, but overall excellent work!

    I'm an Automaton, That's Right!
    Fantasía · NAF12
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    respondió a aleksandra_pano10

    thanks for your honest review :)

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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Publicado por

    great story and i like MC and genres like this. nice writing style but need little improvement about punctuation, the paragraph long, and the number of words per chapter is also comfortable to read,

    My throne
    Historia · aleksandra_pano10
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Comentado por

    you have great story and i like the MC character. But for dialogue, you need to put " between it. keep writing!

    Este párrafo ha sido eliminado.
    My throne
    Historia · aleksandra_pano10
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Comentado por

    great story

    Ch 4 Third Phoenix Clan
    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Acción · Awespec
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    Comentado por

    i like it. keep writing!

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 Endless Dào
    Endless Dao
    Oriental · Heartless_Qi_
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