KarwandO

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“An Exciting Journey into the Beast Raid Arc!” It's finally here!!! I am thoroughly enjoying the current arc of the Beast raid! You cooked for too long though. Writing Quality: Check! Story development: Check! Character Design: Crazy Crazy. World Background: A lot of lore!! As someone involved with this novel, let me give you some spoilers. The game of perceptions has just begun. The entire plot is freaking good. The best part is the smut is limited. I am lovin it! The only complaint is the update stability! (It's ludicrous)

Sarena supremacy

Crazy Crazy! Sarena, you go girl

Thanks. It will be more fun from now on

When a character is alone it is considered as a writing ethic to speak in double quotes. Otherwise I would've had specifically added that Eliza heard him mumbling something.

Chapters will be here, but just like SH and RR. So, you can read LA for free here.Rejoice.

You are absolutely right! Mongrel was telling the author to stop overworking to fill the chapters, but sad life. He is a dumbass to try and improve quality. He should've just given up on the book just like you did. After all, what can he do when people don't even understand him? I suggest the author to stop righting at all!

Has my editor not answered?

Is it not?