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Sirius459

Sirius459

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Hi New Author Here ^_^ I'm Enjoying Writting Fantasy So Feel Free to Read My Works Feel Free to Contact Me on Discord: NoobMaster69#3853

2022-07-15 Se unióIndonesia
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  • Sirius459
    Sirius4592d
    respondió a nando11

    Thank You, For Your Support[img=recommend]

    Ch 52 For Now, We Just Look Towards Tomorrow
    I'm Just Level 1
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  • Sirius459
    Sirius4591mth
    respondió a Arthuremberheart

    I take that reference from DanMachi Bcause I don't want to create some easy life in dungeon and easy level up for the character i create

    Ch 1 Tower Called Dungeon
    I'm Just Level 1
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  • Sirius459
    Sirius4591mth
    respondió a Tom_Canale

    Nope i don't want make my character immediately become strong or too OP, i want emphasis create my character have development, having feeling fail again and again, lost something precious and overcome all of his weaknesses. PS: Thanks you for giving my book a review and i hope you enjoyed this little adventure.

    I'm Just Level 1
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  • Sirius459
    Sirius4591mth
    respondió a Razor_Sharp_

    Soon My Friends

    Ch 11 The Fine Line Between Life And Death
    I'm Just Level 1
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  • Sirius459
    Sirius4591mth
    respondió a Khan00

    Enjoy Your Read and Don't Forget to Leave The Review

    Ch 9 Fell Into Darkness
    I'm Just Level 1
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  • Sirius459
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    After i read all the chapter i came with the conclusion about this story. First of all the dialog need some improvement it's not like reading a novel but feels like a movie script the world building you create was really nice and i enjoyed reading it so overall yeah this is a good story but need some improvement on the dialog.

    Azaki : the devil warrior
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  • Sirius459
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    well and isekai and using a system too, yeah a common story but after read the five chapter i found some a unique writing style how the author using the first person point of view to make the story really easy to read enjoyable

    The Villain's Magic (Dropped)
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  • Sirius459
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    well at least you got reincarnated dude

    Really? She had ruined my life, disintegrated me, and now she was COMPLAINING about disintegrating me. A vein popped in my forehead - I didn't ask to be lasered to pseudo-heaven by a sociopathic immortal!
    The Villain's Magic (Dropped)
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  • Sirius459
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    The five chapter i read about this story really good. How the character interact each other was a nice dialog and maybe i only read the five chapter about this work so maybe the author make the pace of this work a bit to slow to the conflict but, to be honest i enjoyed reading the five chapters

    Vampire diaries: Strange Love
    Fantasía · Grace_Harley1
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  • Sirius459
    Sirius4591yr
    respondió a Sigheti

    hi, thanks you for review, i hope i can always improve my writing skills after read your review about my works

    Zero Soul
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  • Sirius459
    Sirius4591yr
    respondió a TheAncientOnell

    well what you read on prologue was a sneak peak about the fate our Main Character lets say i made chapter 1 and until the newest chapter about his experience before he well fall into the darkness

    Ch 1 Prologue
    Zero Soul
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  • Sirius459
    Sirius4591yr
    respondió a Zerus

    hi thanks for your feedback i'm glad you give a feedback for my works

    Ch 13 Van Astrea
    Zero Soul
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  • Sirius459
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    ooh a dragon sword

    Este párrafo ha sido eliminado.
    This book will be rewritten 山
    Fantasía · Jeri_
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  • Sirius459
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    after i read your five chapter of your story, i just say you have some great story you made and i really enjoyed what you made. Keep your good work!!

    Eternal Guardian of Mankind
    Fantasía · Sage_Tranquil
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  • Sirius459
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    hmmm... i've read your story and the story it's great and have a good concept, i'm really enjoyed how your develop your character and the background of your story.

    The shadow of dead.
    Fantasía · Surbhi_mithil
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  • Sirius459
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    Very good novel, I have very high expectations for it. Definitively recommended. (for people who enjoyed some detective novel but with extra elf, vampire and demon.)

    DETECTIVE MISS LEE: VAMPIRES AND DEMONS
    Fantasía · Roth_Raven
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  • Sirius459
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    hmmmm.... many CEO story I've read but this work? it feels different from many ceo stories I read. The story feels refreshing and how the author makes relationship with every character was very good.

    The Possessive CEO's Broken Maid
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  • Sirius459
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    i'm really enjoyed your story and how you use the first person style to describe your story that's really amazing for me. It's really interesting to read this novel

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    i dont know why but, when i read the first chapter of this story i don't realize but i'm in chapter 10 of this story and i'm forgot the time when reading it.

    The Demon Vampire And His Mate
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  • Sirius459
    Sirius4591yr
    respondió a qurat_ul_ain4

    thank your for your feedback[img=recommend]

    Zero Soul
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