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Thanks For Your Review, First Off All Yes, it is a system genre but I don't want to more focus about the level, the skill, i want more the story focus about the fantasy like the dungeon, the monsters, how the main character trying understand his system slowly. Bcause the secret of the system is inside the dungeon.

Bcause when the time he reach floor 50, Alicia who was trying to back to outside world, Alicia saw Axel fighting with the Razorback Troll on floor 50 bcause that's the only way to her to reach bottom floor.

Nope, Axel Went go to floor 49 he trying to reach Rising Phoenix guild who was on expedition to floor 60

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I take that reference from DanMachi Bcause I don't want to create some easy life in dungeon and easy level up for the character i create

Nope i don't want make my character immediately become strong or too OP, i want emphasis create my character have development, having feeling fail again and again, lost something precious and overcome all of his weaknesses. PS: Thanks you for giving my book a review and i hope you enjoyed this little adventure.

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After i read all the chapter i came with the conclusion about this story. First of all the dialog need some improvement it's not like reading a novel but feels like a movie script the world building you create was really nice and i enjoyed reading it so overall yeah this is a good story but need some improvement on the dialog.

well and isekai and using a system too, yeah a common story but after read the five chapter i found some a unique writing style how the author using the first person point of view to make the story really easy to read enjoyable

well at least you got reincarnated dude

The five chapter i read about this story really good. How the character interact each other was a nice dialog and maybe i only read the five chapter about this work so maybe the author make the pace of this work a bit to slow to the conflict but, to be honest i enjoyed reading the five chapters

hi, thanks you for review, i hope i can always improve my writing skills after read your review about my works

well what you read on prologue was a sneak peak about the fate our Main Character lets say i made chapter 1 and until the newest chapter about his experience before he well fall into the darkness

hi thanks for your feedback i'm glad you give a feedback for my works

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after i read your five chapter of your story, i just say you have some great story you made and i really enjoyed what you made. Keep your good work!!

hmmm... i've read your story and the story it's great and have a good concept, i'm really enjoyed how your develop your character and the background of your story.