Zepher_Catch

Ooof an patchwork world building always collapses

Please Author I ask to refrain from the dirty as well

The reviewer seems to be complaining about the type of story... where all he said was " Another cliche trash " which the only other thing he mentioned was transmigration and he didn't even talk about it all to much... you are bullshiting

Why are you so confident when assuming how far he has read without any evidence? Is it because of the he got the story wrong? What did he get wrong and what is the story like? Why have you only criticized but avoided giving the actual answer multiple times now... is he actually right and you just want to avoid explaining what the true story is?

What is the base of the story then?

Fair enough, Im about that efficiency and honestly a good fight

I just finished the directly translated raws version, I have some ideas I wanted to give the author, can anyone give me his info. If not can anyone with a Qidian account comment this one the most recent chapter. 1. Mc since the shinto formation's main feature is swallowing, as in taking power from what is sealed to seal it further, the next step would be swallowing not just what is sealed directly. And taking advantage from the transition from the first stage to the next you can take advantage to create something entirely different. For example mc can can create shinto formation with both stage two and one around the "telekinesis" left from refined evil sprits in the shape of a sword achieving achieving the first stage of sealing. Then using the second stage, introduce more "telekinesis" to seal within the original container thus retaining the same size and shape but twice the density of telekinesis. First benefit is shape, the shape of the "telekinesis" can be a sword which is further structurally reinforced with the shinto formation. The mc can cast his metal sword ontop of this dense telekinesis fusion soup, which would certainly empower him. Secondly this can be used as storage/battery when Mc's conciseness growth is sealed again, so mc won't be at a loss while he whittles down the consciousness dao lock. Matter of fact mc can save up enough until he has enough to unlock the lock in the meantime he can put the "telekinesis" he harvested to use as a weapon which would other wise be wasted. And also when he uses all of what he as collected on the lock at the same time, the dao show ought to be a more powerful version. Third use is he can create a sword in real life, paint a shinto formation on it, using his uncle's teachings separate his consciousness and send it into the sword, when inside the sword directly manifest this sword inside the shinto formation via many methods best one being the pupil technique, giving his sword the ability to attack physically, and mentally.

I see your point, I believe we have both been looking at this from a logical perspective instead of a character development perspective. From that perspective, the reason he made that choice was an artistic discussion from the authors as it was a reflection (no pun intended) of the mirror trap situation, to show character development, which he did but keeping half of his team and reserves yet still going forward. The choice he made to go forward as this was a test and he knew it would not be what it seemed on the surface. At this point in the story, he is still taking risks but he is starting to become slightly cautious. Also from the perspective of process of elimination. Number one, the plant has been attacked and is already in communication with his father, therefore his father must’ve contacted him back, yet he didn't so we can assume one of two things one which it ends up being the case is a jammer, number two is there is no one left on the planet to call back meaning enemies are still here waiting.

To be frank, I feel like I’m talking to a wall. the comment I recommended was to return to expand upon abilities instead of simply adding more, we know they work we just don’t know why he stopped expanding upon abilities. This was never meant to be an argument. The wedding just got lazy, he could create synergies, which would help him better select abilities to empower said synergies, or cover an aspect of his combat abilities, he cannot with synergies. Yet I have no idea why this is being argued. We know it works, I never said to do this instead of gathering abilities I said instead of just gathering abilities, yet every time I look at my iPad, there’s another comment, another argument, and I’d rather just be done.

Do you know what I’m not even gonna read that I give up? You’re right I’m wrong.