Tobirama_uchiha777
Elon Musk is trying to send me to Mars, but I'm not sure if I want to go.
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Tobirama_uchiha77711hrespondió a Glorious4EyedKingTenkuna.- Tobirama_uchiha7771dComentado por
just don't make him too op earlier in the fic and have gradual power development otherwise the fic becomes trash and generic Read many fics where author makes thec too much op with multiple items and this leads to two most common paths 1) author then nerfs mc over ridiculous reasons and destroys the fic or 2) doesn't know how to proceed anymore since mc can technically one shot anyone
Let me know and also, know from now on, he is going to be different from before. - Tobirama_uchiha7771dComentado por
so much for the reincarnation tag bro not even gonna prolly kill someone if it goes to extreme
Okay, for those of you who are wondering why the Main Character is not acting like a transmigrator or why is he still acting like Barry, well that's because he is Barry. - Tobirama_uchiha7773drespondió a GachibazzI open my eyes and see a giant hand grabbing me. I see a woman crying, seemingly breaking mentally and I see my Father, Kronos who just throws me into his mouth and swallows. What a prick. Why is my father swallowing me? What the f*ck is going onnn?
- Tobirama_uchiha7774dComentado porCh 259 Amazon Lily, Old Pirates and Traditions
- Tobirama_uchiha7775drespondió a Honoured_Writer
sauce ?
"Fucking disappointment," I say as his eyes widen and a flash of extreme anger comes on his face. - Tobirama_uchiha7775drespondió a Anomander_Adaar
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AN: I've narrowed down the Female lead to two people, either Queen Maeve or Kimiko Miyashiro. Please vote on the picture I post in this paragraph section, by liking the photo. Any other ways of voting will not be counted, the vote ends next Saturday, 04/26/2024. - Tobirama_uchiha7776dComentado por
we need regular updates authorsan
A voice spoke. "[Domain Expansion: Malevolent Shrine]." - Tobirama_uchiha7777dComentado porCh 235 HWI 235
- Tobirama_uchiha77710dComentado por"Now, I've rid myself of the influence of those negative emotions and am a completely new, unprecedentedly good symbiote." (A/N: Source; trust me bro)
- Tobirama_uchiha77711drespondió a no_to_supp_abuseCh 19 The Martells visit II
- Tobirama_uchiha77711dComentado por
this chapter was really idiotic and cringe bro
You'll pay for this. - Tobirama_uchiha77711dComentado por
bro she's a kid author's sus af
"Haha, I competed in the archery contest shortly before your mother went into labour. But now I'm a guest and no longer a competitor. Besides, I need to keep an eye on you and that's impossible when I'm competing.", he says and smiles slyly. - Tobirama_uchiha77711drespondió a Slrrrp
most people atleast expect common logic and grammar
A/N So I stopped using ChatGPT to revise some of the dialogue. If you don't like it, don't read it. It is my story and I think my words are not bad. I am doing research to increase my vocabulary already. So take it or leave it. - Tobirama_uchiha77711drespondió a DaoistWDfd8h
I know you are trying to write an asoiaf but this is getting borderline crack fic rather than the tone of asoiaf maybe add the tag of crack or comedy too
"Don't worry, Jon Jon. I can handle myself. And I doubt Lord Lannister would want to start a war by harming the heir of House Baratheon.", Robert said, placing a reassuring hand on Jon's shoulder. - Tobirama_uchiha77713dComentado porEste libro ha sido eliminado.
- Tobirama_uchiha77713drespondió a VirginYoungMaster
- Tobirama_uchiha77713drespondió a VirginYoungMaster