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Karito_

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Never let yourself bleed...

2022-07-01 Se unióGlobal
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  • Karito_
    Karito_3mth
    respondió a Quin_Bland

    Give me some slack guys, I'm an idiot.

    "Anyway," Master Pakku said. "I was just on my way to meet with Chief Arnook about some important Water Tribe matters. Would you care to join me?"
    ATLA: The Phoenix of Hope
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  • Karito_
    Karito_9mth
    Comentado por

    Brother give it another shot. Dont worry about the break. I dont know about you but I got kind of lazy and couldn't find the inspiration to continue.

    Ch 7 Ok well here goes nothing
    How To Train Your Dragon: The Black Dread
    Película · Dreams_From_Beyond
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  • Karito_
    Karito_9mth
    Comentado por

    wait did he kiss her on her cheek or hair?

    Ch 92 Chapter 92: Into the Deep
    Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
    Derivados de obras · athass_prkr
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  • Karito_
    Karito_11mth
    respondió a The_reader_ofnovel

    He's trying to keep Toph far away from Zuko. The offence its self isn't that wrong. Just an overprotective father.

    "Vanish. Disappear without a trace." Lao Beifong leaned forward on his desk, his eyes cold and calculating. "You can a have a ship and a crew. However I want you gone by the end of the day. You will leave this town and never return, and in exchange, you will not suffer the consequences of your actions. It is a fair deal, is it not?"
    ATLA: The Phoenix of Hope
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  • Karito_
    Karito_11mth
    Publicado por

    Hey guys, shameless author here to give himself a good review. This a different version of ATLA as my previous one ended as a failure. Hope you enjoy...

    ATLA: The Phoenix of Hope
    Cómic · Karito_
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  • Karito_
    Karito_11mth
    respondió a Donagha

    thx

    Este párrafo ha sido eliminado.
    ATLA: The Phoenix of Hope
    Cómic · Karito_
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  • Karito_
    Karito_11mth
    respondió a LucyAzomonia

    Yep just don't have the will to continue

    Ch 1 Rocky start
    Harry potter: The ringmaker
    Derivados de obras · loskro
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  • Karito_
    Karito_1yr
    Comentado por

    Hey man! Great novel, though noticed the book cover ain't really selling the point so chose to come up with something wizard related. Enjoy. :)

    Ch 1 Rocky start
    Harry potter: The ringmaker
    Derivados de obras · loskro
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  • Karito_
    Karito_1yr
    Publicado por

    It's great so far. I am really enjoying the story line. Although the update schedule is garbage. Author should try upload once a while.

    Rising of the Bow hero
    Cómic · Smol_frog
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  • Karito_
    Karito_1yr
    respondió a Lazy_w

    Yeah

    And so on.
    ATLA: The Master
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  • Karito_
    Karito_1yr
    respondió a Thananos

    How to train your dragon

    HTTYD: The White Wolf
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  • Karito_
    Karito_1yr
    respondió a Shakujo

    That's too cliche, even for me 😁

    Despite that, he did find something interesting. At one of the islands, he had found a small podium with a charcoal-like stone, the size of first. Now, he did not know if the stone was valuable or not. But his gut told him that it was.
    ATLA: The Master
    Cómic · Karito_
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  • Karito_
    Karito_1yr
    respondió a Rick_S4nchez

    Yeah, I was planning of writing about the whole timeline

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
    HTTYD: The White Wolf
    Película · Karito_
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  • Karito_
    Karito_1yr
    respondió a FictiveFodder

    Heh heh

    Ch 2 Chapter 2 The Wishes
    ATLA: The Master
    Cómic · Karito_
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  • Karito_
    Karito_1yr
    respondió a Anonny_Anonymous

    Although the idea is great. It doesn't fit the power theme of the world. Plus there wont be much of a story if he's able to one shot Ozai

    Ch 2 Chapter 2 The Wishes
    ATLA: The Master
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  • Karito_
    Karito_1yr
    respondió a SexyYoungMaster

    I did mention that I won't use Toph as a love interest for the mc, because she is too young.

    "For my last wish, I want to be born in Ba Sing Se, to a high-class noble family, 4 years before the Gaang." Kypher attempted again still having some slight hope in having a good starting point and family and not angering the figure he was bartering with.
    ATLA: The Master
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  • Karito_
    Karito_1yr
    respondió a Pearless_pear42

    Good idea. Too overpowered for early game

    Imagine, the ability to manipulate sound from being perceived. A sound-bender might snap his fingers and the opponents ear drums might burst. Or a whistle might turn into horrifyingly disorienting and loud white noise. Or sense everything in a 360° sphere. Or even remove sound from existence. Now take a deep breath and imagine what the air-benders could do if they were not pacifists. Yeah... Thank Michael DiMartino for that.
    ATLA: The Master
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  • Karito_
    Karito_1yr
    respondió a LongSongGolden

    Yeah so I decided change the Iroh siege to when Kypher was 4. This speeds up a few things. I won't spoil anything, however things happen in Ba Sing Se. I didn't just use it a safe place of birth.

    It was only until the next day that they had concluded their discussion. It was something that Kypher needed, wisdom, another perspective, advice. He had been working on his own for many years now and the advice of a man nearly 150 years old was truly fascinating. But enough was enough, he had to continue on his journey. It was currently 98 AG the winter had just passed and the story would start in a bit less than 2 years.
    ATLA: The Master
    Cómic · Karito_
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  • Karito_
    Karito_1yr
    Publicado por

    Shameless Author here.. Thank you for trying to read my novel. As I said any and all advice in writing is helpful So please, if you do leave a review, I would always appreciate the commentary and advice. Thanks [img=recommend] img

    HTTYD: The White Wolf
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  • Karito_
    Karito_1yr
    respondió a Dragonised101

    He needed to know where his current location was. You cant do that with the tattoo

    After reaching the nearest town, he decided to buy a map. Apparently the town he was in, was just a bit less than 60 miles east of the fire nation capital, and unlike the Gaang, he was not wanted for anything at the moment.
    ATLA: The Master
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