Ironskipper
I am currently writing the novel, "The Extra's War."
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Author, just a small suggestion, take this with a grain of salt, but I think Julien's reason here is a bit weak, as he is potentially sacrificing himself to save Leon to not look like a fraud, which seems a bit far-fetched.
I think you meant, 'reliving the moment.'
👍, keep up the good work.
Author, beware of modern slang in an old-fashioned fantasy, for example, the word, 'Ya'll,' doesn't seem to fit the context.
3, imagine it being reinforced with wooden planks and rusting sheet metal
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