Raven_paw123
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I have a lot of incomplete stories.I mainly make each story because I don't know what to write for the others.
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Raven_paw1237mthComentado porI saw the comic and ordered bleach
Bai Qingqing covered her flushed face with her hands. If she looked at it any longer, she was going to have stys on her eyes.- Raven_paw1237mthrespondió a Rosmery_Martinez
-shrug-
Also, was it really okay for that thing to be swinging around like that? Wasn't he afraid of hitting it? - Raven_paw1237mthrespondió a KTpi
only possible explanation 🤷
Was this guy on drugs? - Raven_paw1237mthComentado por
HE BREATHED
"That's good. I'm Parker, a male leopard!" Parker crouched in front of Bai Qingqing and inhaled deeply as he looked at her carefully. This action caused a huge thing between his legs to swing about wildly. - Raven_paw1237mthrespondió a Missy_C
-wheeeeeze- I cant!
"That's good. I'm Parker, a male leopard!" Parker crouched in front of Bai Qingqing and inhaled deeply as he looked at her carefully. This action caused a huge thing between his legs to swing about wildly. - Raven_paw1237mthComentado porParker felt that the female was so beautiful that he forgot to breathe.
- Raven_paw1237mthrespondió a Inge_Smits
Lol
The best thing about Bai Qingqing was her fair and flawless skin. She didn't seem stunning at first glance, but the longer he stared at her, the more beautiful she seemed. Her large and slightly downturned eyes made her seem extremely innocent. - Raven_paw1237mthComentado por
Am I okay? AM I OKAY? *BLEEP* DO I LOOK OKAY?
Parker immediately chased after her. He had let the female fall off the tree as he was shocked as well. Extremely anxious, he crouched in front of the female and asked her, "Female, are you okay?" - Raven_paw1237mthrespondió a Kyrie_Harrell
MOMMA!😱😱
"Ah!" It transformed into a living person! - Raven_paw1237mthrespondió a knighteaster
Ima scream louder than my sister when she breaks my eardrums
The lithe leopard ran over from the grass that had corpses strewn across the ground, jumped into the air, and suddenly transformed into a naked man. He was tall and slender, but he was highly flexible. His feet, which maintained his running posture, landed lightly and agilely on the ground. Then, with a few jumps, he arrived on the tree, his golden eyes staring intently at Bai Qingqing. - Raven_paw1237mthComentado por
And possibly become his lunch later.
Although the battle hadn't ended, Bai Qingqing felt relieved. She knew that the leopard would definitely win. - Raven_paw1239mthrespondió a Sadvac22Ch 14 Another Somewhat Free for All
- Raven_paw1239mthrespondió a Sadvac22Ch 14 Another Somewhat Free for All
- Raven_paw12310mthrespondió a LStar_334
You're still loved.
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - Raven_paw12310mthrespondió a LStar_334
So I've heard.
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - Raven_paw1231yrrespondió a AMonarch
- Raven_paw1231yrrespondió a Shadow_Magus
- Raven_paw1231yrComentado porCh 1 Death
- Raven_paw1231yrrespondió a Junni_MC
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I like it. It's really good. But I have this kind of pet peeve where people just speed the things. On the last few lines, I'll be honest, I'd probably write it so that while the character is walking to the room, he is also thinking. But that's my opinion. Overall, I love the story. Keep up the good work. 🙂
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