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First off going to preface this by saying that the subplot with the two identities thing goes on for a long time but does have a satisfying end and it isn’t like dragged on I feel. So that is just a warning for readers who tend to prefer quicker story beats. However outside of that I really enjoy all of the characters dearly and the characters are fairly consistent throughout, so no gross mischaracterizations of cannon characters. This story is a real slow burn and heavy on text but if you like me enjoy that type of stuff you should try this out. I will also note that Danzo plays a huge role or at least he is set up to play a huge role which I find really interesting. All of the mist village politics are also a lot more complicated than like Konohas so if you don’t really fw really complicated moral dilemmas then read smth else
I think this is him reconciling with both sides understanding that moder values hold little worth in the Naruto world and will most likely place him in the middle
What why would this like cold heartless killer read shounen manga something that is targeted towards teens? It’s the little in consistencies that really matter as they end up having a larger impact on the actually themes and how the story comes across to the reader.
Tbf Naruto was supposed to end like way earlier than expected and I felt that all the lore past during and after shippuden was a little rushed. I mean some parts feel fleshed out but still.
I like to think that the reason why Jiran is so gifted at air bending is because he embodies air ability to adapt and change showcased with his personality
Omg character growth!
I think a big problem with a lot of fanfics is this constant need to use power and strength of justifiers for good storytelling. I think the story would be fine just exploring failsafe as a character as they are now as I find this trope of an ai gaining sentience really cool thing to think about
overall the concept seems to be solid but the it has some problems such as how the author doesn't use quotations so it can be hard to discern what is dialogue well, we also lack an understanding of the characters so for our perspective they just do stuff to do stuff, a little fast paced (this one is just preference), the actually format is weird (you'll understand when you start reading), the use of emojis breaks the immersion, and the parenthesis being used to both describe thoughts, and actions as well can be a little jarring
just like me fr
this would be cool. i like rapheal thou
please do not say he slept with little girls.