daiost_Pure_void

WOOW.....just wow

so basically at the time of wang wei's birth we say a black shadow hidden in the room that was watching the birth as well as FUTURE WANG WEI who was stronger than even GRAND DAO ....because most probably this wang wei was the one who had achieved TRASCENDENCE.........and the black shadow was the future PARAGON WANG WEI who came to past to knoe what happened at his birth

now we know what was that black shadow that was watching wang wei at the time of his birth

absolute garbage.............................................................................................................. definitely not worth reading.

i mean why do you think you are someone special. You are just a coward. no one will go through uncharted territories, endangering hundreds of important life, just to save your little puny life.

yeah........kinda feels like the comedy was forced somewhere it was not needed

i rally really really like this novel so far. it has a nice blend of funny moments and story progression in it. overall i think it is a good read.

the problem is you used two tenses in same sentence.......WAS suffocating and HAVE grave expression .....so fix one.....I am assuming you are going with present pov so fix that WAS suffocating to IS suffocating

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brother I humbly demand a mass release