Mountanification

Spelling and grammar is killing me.

First 40 chapters are fun, thenthe translation changes and makes it unreadable.

Too much filler and the author needs to tone down his racial preferences a bit.

4x as many Chinese people in the US than Japanese but ok LOL!

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

I think this book has a lot of potential. I’d like to see the author put a little more time into forging and adding an additional level of detail to the games. Calling the beast “a moth” or “a mouse” just seems a bit lazy, add some nouns like a “Temporal Void Moth” or “Meta Time Mouse”. Also the stories progression seems a bit off, went from not being able to fight iron rats to fighting a dragon godmod death in like 20 chapters, something like that should happen over 200 chapters. Same with the whole family confrontation, came a bit too early in the story.

Way to many point of views, too much prophesizing to be enjoyable. Let the protagonist live a little before you drag all this garbage out. Author put a lot of effort into the back drop and world building but really forced it down your throat.