Yosoya
i want pizza so i write. my socials are either yosoyawriting or just yosoya. feel free to love me, i really need it.
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Thank you so much!! I'll try my hardest not to disappoint you! And yes it does take me a little bit longer than others to post because I care so much about the characters and story so I want to do it justice! However new chapters are coming soon!! As always, all feedback is very much so appreciated!!
Oh okay, how this part is worded is a little confusing.
Instead of "he saw her" it should be "he saw him."
There is a bit of information overload at the beginning of the chapter in regards to the kingdoms and rulers. The character Hyena's pronouns switch back and forth and I don't know if that was intentional so it is a little confusing. Other than that the story is very interesting and I am curious about the world so I will continue to read!
What the heck is Donn?!
Thank you for clicking on my story and I hope you enjoy the journey!!