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KuyaImbo

KuyaImbo

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2022-05-26 Se unióPhilippines
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  • KuyaImbo
    KuyaImboa year ago
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    sent you a DM

  • KuyaImbo
    KuyaImboa year ago
    respondió a bloody_potato

    Hey, is there a way to connect with you? Is it okay if you give your discord here?

  • KuyaImbo
    KuyaImboa year ago
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    Good read, and good story by the author. What i want to point out is the intriguing storyline, the backstory and lore seems interesting and also the worldbuilding. One thing that can be improved is the writing style, specially the exchange of dialogues between the characters. There are also some grammar mistakes, but they're so minimal that they don't affect the overall reading experience. Overall, the story is great and has lot of potential. Will definetely keep this to my list as I wait for more chapters to be published.

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  • KuyaImbo
    KuyaImboa year ago
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    nice

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  • KuyaImbo
    KuyaImboa year ago
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    nice, keep it going

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  • KuyaImbo
    KuyaImboa year ago
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    selena

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  • KuyaImbo
    KuyaImboa year ago
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    page breaked the paragraph

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  • KuyaImbo
    KuyaImboa year ago
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    nice nice

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  • KuyaImbo
    KuyaImboa year ago
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    remove "you" in the sentence

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  • KuyaImbo
    KuyaImboa year ago
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    ok... things are getting interesting

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