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Zbara_15773 days agoComentado porbastard dares to cliffhanger me!!?!
- Zbara_15773 days agoComentado por
also good chapters, I prefer this pace.
- Zbara_15773 days agoComentado por
I liek this chapter more than all the previous ones, Simply because the plot is moving. you've got a great idea, but the beginning felt a tad too slow, given everything and anything that could take place in W40k. I dont necessarily mean power gain, just that plot must move in a story like this
- Zbara_157718 days agoComentado por
10% will always love, 10% will always hate. 80% matters on what you do
- Zbara_157720 days agoComentado por
are they not 7 years old?
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - Zbara_157721 days agoComentado por
but will they stand up to the German team? that was the highest rated national team ever
- Zbara_157722 days agoPublicado por
good shit I imagine this is the author if his mom found out
- Zbara_157722 days agoComentado por
bro can finally get a wc 💀
- Zbara_157722 days agoComentado por
from what I'm seeing, you are setting up the mc to have 80+ goal contributions in La Liga alone, at 17, which will put him at Messi and ronaldos level immediately. Just be aware of that and how the world would react.
- Zbara_157723 days agorespondió a Virtuosso
ya like this not 1 the whole time
