The plot is too much strong and the characterisation is also good, the arrangements of the scenes are extraordinary. but Joey where is he why do you ignore him, I am waiting for Joey.

There are many pretty things in your story but I like Damen the most. he is a totally different male lead character. I am waiting for the next restlessly.

I love princess stories. your story is my favourite story. and moreover, I love your strong plot. in your main idea, readers will get a strong clue about your story.

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The start of your story is super good, the plot is very strong, and the main idea of the story creates curiosity. I hope you will complete it. I want more... and I love your book cover.

The start of your story is super good, the plot is very strong, and the main idea of the story creates curiosity. I hope you will complete it. I want more...

I like your story title it is marvellous, I love your writing style. your plot is super strong. I hope you must complete your novel, I'm waiting for the next.

The title of your book is super good no doubt, your plot is strong, I love your character arrangement, and I'm pretty sure your story will be super good.

The title of your book is super good no doubt, your plot is strong, I love your character arrangement, and I'm pretty sure your story will be super good.

The title of your book is super good no doubt, your plot is strong, I love your character arrangement, and I'm pretty sure your story will be super good.

The title of your book is super good no doubt, your plot is strong, I love your character arrangement, and I'm pretty sure your story will be super good.

hi, your story title is great, the main idea, I'm pretty sure must be caught the attention of many readers, your plot is strong no doubt, and the arrangements of characters are well.