MrPlatypus

Understandable, just keep up the current quality of the chapters.

Great chapter!

Nice chapter, Author. See you next time tomorrow.

I like this one it is really creative and is very diverse.

Satoru do be cheering ngl.

Practice grammar or use Grammarly. You should think about your wording as it can get a bit messy. You should also think about not information dumping. Give it to them in smaller portions instead, and it won't feel as overwhelming. You shouldn't take requests from readers as they often times don't know what they want until you give them to them, and it often times ruins either the story or the flow of it. Your way of conversation is making the story very boring. It feels like I'm reading a script. Use quotation marks instead. It is all about practice. Good luck.

Well, wouldn't it be more interesting if he had some sort of spatial ability instead? Or maybe a manipulating, like Shin Uchiha?

Okay, I am sorry I can't anymore. I will take my leave now. Hope you guys continue to enjoy the story in my stead, thank you and goodbye.

Is this a penalty system? I don't really like those stories. It is a very easy solution for lack of imagination and you always know he will finish the quest as the MC wouldn't die at the beginning of the story. Well, I hope you don't disappoint me.