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Idontcarereally27dComentado porI thought Mary died ???!
But ye, that. Next couple chaps will be interludes that I'm probably going to use to just timeskip to canon, because holy fuck if I don't timeskip to canon this fic is gonna end up being a million fucking words lmfao- Idontcarereally1mthComentado por
The weird symbols again
Anna's eyes widen. "You're… Oh, that's why she's opening the tomb." - Idontcarereally1mthrespondió a Raat_Ki_Rani
Like the weird Å and the random £ signs
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What was up with all the weird letters? But still good.
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Do you talk like this in real life im curious.
Dear Readers, - Idontcarereally2mthComentado por
LEAVE SPACES. This looks really bad and is hard to read.
~ Ami POV ~ - Idontcarereally2mthrespondió a Dragonfly_SS
That would be good. It’s not like you get attached to them in the game anyway. New things just make it more interesting.
In a calming yet demanding voice, he spoke. "We should talk." It wasn't a suggestion. - Idontcarereally2mthComentado por
I think you rushed th chapters since Harry was glitched. It’s alright but could be a lot better if you took your time.
The entire room began shaking apart that that point and Harry didn't even bother trying to save himself as he slid back off the platform. He crashed down hard on top of his shield several seconds later before the floor of the Dungeon room shattered beneath him but Harry didn't even register the physical pain he felt because his heart was still shattering into millions of pieces. As the world around him broke apart, Harry screamed a second time and this time his magic exploded outwards to sweep through the world that had been his home for two years. - Idontcarereally2mthComentado por
Not to far from the bite. 0-0
In a calming yet demanding voice, he spoke. "We should talk." It wasn't a suggestion. - Idontcarereally2mthComentado por
Cool stuff
A large, hefty stone launched from behind Mirya searing through the air with a definitive whisper of wind, it impacted the Ogre's torn leg with a sickening crunch that took the leg from the thigh down causing it to stumble in its charge and fall forward as it made a poor attempt at regaining its balance, at that moment Mirya shifted her focus intent on using this chance to cull the amount of Goblins in the area knowing that should she let them linger, they'd only spell her doom. Especially now that she was poisoned… - Idontcarereally2mthComentado por
I thought she would make it music related for some reason
"Storm Breathing Style it is then." - Idontcarereally2mthComentado por
I thought they could only die to special metal?
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I’m falling off
My eyes went wide and my breath slightly hitched. "Oh..." - Idontcarereally3mthPublicado por
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Did you personally not use a comma after grammer? If so that’s great
/Usual reminder, this is my first fic, so expect, fucked pacing, grammar character personality, interactions, and more, most likely. Enjoy.\ - Idontcarereally3mthComentado por
Demon clem.
So shocked by this, he hadn't realized he'd locked eyes with the very abomination that had done this. Just in time to watch it pull the Jolene in half. Leaving only him and it left. - Idontcarereally3mthComentado por
On the day of 100 powerstomes nice timing
The Bloody End - Idontcarereally3mthrespondió a Dragonfly_SS
Cause clementines on her own?
"No... It would be... Delightful."