Osirys04

Not bad at all.. the background is solid and structured enough to keep the story going for many many chapters. Characther building, well, of that I haven’t seen much, it’s till early (I’m at the first visit to the city) but the MC is good but has some major problem. Some things should be told directly, tell directly if his mind is that of a child, as having “complete” memories of past life means having the complete pack of a 25 years old adult… you can’ t just take some things as a child and some as an adult, stick to your decision or it will ruin the character. All in all, i quite like it and seeing the latest work on web Nobel I hope you can gradually improve this novel and create a great book!, keep it up, author!!!