Celestial_Kaiser
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Celestial_Kaiser3 months agorespondió a Xlander289Este párrafo ha sido eliminado.- Celestial_Kaiser6 months agorespondió a Celestial_Kaiser
wing->wrong* , done->the*
- Celestial_Kaiser6 months agoComentado por
I mean, why SI? OCs are always far more preferred.
Este libro ha sido eliminado. - Celestial_Kaiser6 months agoComentado por
Just one piece of advice. Remove the em dashes. I can see you used AI in your work, but it doesn't seem full AI, maybe I'm wing, I don't know. So, remove the em dashes and change the phrasing of done sentences that feels like AI.
- Celestial_Kaiser7 months agoComentado por
I see you
- Celestial_Kaiser8 months agorespondió a Knot4SailEste párrafo ha sido eliminado.
- Celestial_Kaiser8 months agorespondió a Daoistcl1sv3
Suvar bhakt spotted
- Celestial_Kaiser9 months agorespondió a Elemecha
No, it was the 3rd person POV
- Celestial_Kaiser9 months agorespondió a PHOENIX_PRIMA
Gay af