Rimuru_Tempest_9546

Well, After your comment I added title to it.

Author-san are you Indian?. Ummm~I suggest you use the quill editing app. It can help you to fix grammar in one click and also you can paraphrase it. Although you will get only standard and fluency mode in the free version it's good and also use the Grammarly app after editing with quill app. You can also find out your summary of the whole chapter and many more. Thank you. Remember it's quill not quick, and try to use it through Google, don't download the app as it's crashed many times.

well, I am not a senior😄, now I remember it, I have read your love for yandere fanfictions about a months ago and good to know, that you are the same author.

Thanks for reading it.

Tbh, after watching your fanfic I got a little demotivated or felt inferior as I was also writing a demon slayer fanfic. I mean you are way too professional, in writing skills and many more. your story has great potential and I hope you will continue it. Go forward Author-san. ( mind if you motivate me a little 🙃 )

No problem, you remind me of my little brother, so I dont mind helping you.

choose a novel with good writing quality and grammar and used it as a reference to your novel. I mean, you should watch the writing of the novel and try to copy it. For example, you wrote ‘ the sun is shining in the sky ' while the other wrote ‘ the sun is hung high in the sky, shone down on the whole village'. So you should replace your writing with the other one. Which looks good and fits your novel. You can also read the reaction of the character and try to use it in your novel. This will be copied at first but as time flies, you will gain a lot of experience. it's not like you are copying their whole story. And use the quill editing app, I will recommend you to use this app through google as the app will lag sometimes.

No need to thanked me, I am also an Indian.

Hello, my lovely Indian. You should use quill editing app for paragraph editing. It can edit your paragraph and will also fix grammar errors. unlike Grammarly, you can fix all grammar with just one click, but I will recommend you to use both apps. Or you can google it. Best of luck.

You are right, but how should I explain it to you, as it will take too much time for me to write. Well, he isn't looking at the world simply as we look and seeing something different than usual ( as it was nature sense ability, I am trying to familiarise him with the nature and show something different that normal people couldn't able to see ) And for the tress, In anime most of the trees look the same as the others, I mean you can watch demon slayer training episode, where Urokodaki took Tanjiro to cut the boulder, the trees around him almost look the same. thanks for the comment, have a great day.