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Thanks for the comment bro. When you said this, I immediately had an epiphany. I really focused too much on the development of the story so I forgot that the chemistry between the reader and MC is also needed. In future, I will pay attention to this, thanks a lot bro.

Hello Readers, here is the author of this novel. Previously, I had written several novels but never really finished them. But for this, I have seriousness to finish this novel and make it my first novel. For that, I need constructive criticism and suggestions from you so that I can improve and improve the quality of my novel. Thanks.

Ah, this is just the beginning of the story. I'm also thinking of adding other weapon elements in the future. However, not now

haha, ya, it's similar

wait for the next chapter, bro, he he

ha ha, yes, it's too dangerous :v

The system created a shop only for Lein's main interests or the things he needed the most. Such as food, items for making potions, etc. However, the large jug Lein had ordered was not among the things he needed most. Moreover, a jug to serve as a backpack. That's why Lein thought of making his own jug. But, thanks for your comments. I will try to cover up plot holes in my story in the future :)

thanks for your appreciation bro. I will write asap

Thank you, Brother