Primal_Deva

I'm liking this so far. When you mentioned thinking outside the box with his Technique, instead of using arrows, why not make something like a metal shell filled with blood, like a musket ball. Then instead of firing arrows, he can be like magneto and have bullets fly around him that he carries in a small pouch. Just a thought. Otherwise, keep up the good work

Story is unique and original. Grammer is great, especially since the speech is following the rules it did hundreds of years ago. Looking forward to all the future chapters you bring.

That's fair lol. I'm kinda going for a kid that learns way too quickly. Not a full on genius, but just developed into an adult mindset because of an inherited ability. Sort of like Gojo's Six Eyes

Please change this! Even something's like seishin dorobo would be better (spirit thief) Stop using romaji

I found this story not too long ago and I can honestly say it's the best jujutsu kaisen fic I've found. Good story development, unique plot and an actual original cursed technique that isn't just reusing the known ones. If you still plan on continuing this story, I look forward to any future updates you decide to write