Majer3

Great balance in story. Not just 60% smut or nonsense. There is pretty good world building going on. My thanks to writer from other writer. fillerrr letterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrs

One of the best dark/gray stories. One of the best stories where constant attention is given to agency and directive for MC in so far that story is not lacking in behind or full of filler. This world has its own rules, moral, balances, economics, diplomacy and logic. Also the magic system is eerily close to reality of particles that adds to the reader's immersion of the world displayed in the story. Also one of the features I have used in my magic theory centered story. There are few other particle magic based stories, but this one is one of the best examples of it. As a fellow writer I would like to encourage writer of this novel to continue with this balance and style in general. Only thing that I could change is the matter of options displayed in story. There could be different pathways for MC to take, and different situations could solve with different reasoning. If MC gets rich and powerfull he doesn't need to do every kill the rats from my dungeon quest anymore. Building strenght, influencing society, partaking in diplomacy, economics and businesses are also worthy choices including deeper magic theory development. All this could need more space and reduce the same amount from MC constantly doing some manner of lenghty side quest. It would also help with world building in deeper sense. This is only advice I can give because The Plagiarist has aced almost every other aspect of writing this type of story. Please continue your seminally important works for dark/gray genre.

One of the best gray/dark stories with very balanced smut (not overtaking the entire story like in litterally 99% of the cases). Interesting economic details, very tantalicing diplomatics and powerstruggles. No fillers. As a fellow writer Im going to give this 5 because this story is one of those top 5% of dark/gray stories and storyline is realistic and fitting. Please continue this work, and don't listen to normal people whining who haven't read anything dark and who lack total understanding of this genre.

Hey, things happen. I had to discontinue whole patreon and put things on hold because of work and other nonsense. Hopefully I can continue at some point also. It has been awhile. From other writer to writer.

Yea time is kind of limited sometimes. Thanks for comment on the storyline :)

As you wished. I command to thee elements to give motivation to the author! Synthetic rune symbols starts to glow and weird substances goes into the head of the author*

DAAAARKKKK KK AHAAAHAHAHAHAA !!! Darkness arises!

Thanks, plotting will be very integral part of this story.

This following review has been published by Wise Entities Sect Academy (a writer community). https://wise-entities-padoga.webnode.page/sect-academia/ -According to the synopsis it will be a spicy ride into comedy love story with BLU ROYAL CHEESE my friends the cheesiest cheese there is. -Hold up there is BL tag underneath, the drama just doubled, will the woman MC ever get it right or will someone else take the CEO and his money. We will find out in another episode just like in The Bold and the Beautiful what our grannies love to watch, and they hit you if you go in between television on their worship hour. So, if someone things romance comedy office social porn parody thing is a joke no, it’s not fun. Pretty far away from the fun. Its like 1.7 billion grandmothers on you if you do it wrong. -I klick the read and I can smell the cheese already/5 -Oh NO! The breakup day! That is da worse okay! You have to have at least 4 to 10 hours facial scrub mask and cucumbers on your eyes while you wollow one day in agonizing self-pity like martini without olive and on the next day in the first half an hour of the day you download tinder again and get to work while forgetting your piece of work ex completely, although crying about it in therapy for 4 years. Thats cheese with ravioli on top. -A woman who can’t clean her stuff/5. This princess is going to suffer I just know. Will we see the hit the wall period and regrets of not educating herself properly and other stuff. Oi joi joi. But reader do not worry, maybe the INHERITANCE can help year or two. (Hey your review is shit there is no inheritance* I thought to myself. But inheritance is like pinnacle of arbitrary cheesy social dick waving among the depsides relatives. Will we see this drama eventually in face slap style?) -I don't know is it a genre thing but why these dramas are written in 70-90% dialogue form? World building is therefore depended on it and its very narrow and if the activity is not very unique it really doesn't help the reader to stay focused. -Table of content is like manual if you hear it from the lips of your love you know it’s time to leave one day. Horror experience 5/5 victim game play, guilt trip, disappointment, such a indirect qualities. Luckily there are far more better women existing trustable, relatable, awkward and cute, odd habits but so kind heart you almost cry when they happily do some basic stuff somewhere around the house and the knot around the cynical heart gets a bit lose. Love women but sell the princesses to Poland to get Galleys.

This following review has been published by Wise Entities Sect Academy (a writer community). https://wise-entities-padoga.webnode.page/sect-academia/ Fate. (Fuck I hate that world really it always drops the agency and real choice, and things are thought in deterministic ideologies/religions/bs philosophies. Fate is the step uncle of laziness. Oh yea the story -Okay I get the point in synopsis but now synopsis doesn't really tell anything but cliche determination plot thing, albeit in kind of critical manner but still. The point of the synopsis is either info dump enough to advertise the whole world building, or invest reader to specific main character/s or offer some unique or very specific scenario that might interest people as a advertisement. It really has to motivate people to open your novel. Because of this reason I recommend re-writing it based on your world and actual setting. -Antihero genius, I hope this is done by not making everyone else stupid. -When you steal 95 imperial coins?? So what’s the value of it, could MC say that this won’t even buy me 1 week of food or something comparable. This is always very important when any number of coins or currencies are first introduced. -Damn the story flow is pretty decent, only thing I would want more is decent info dumping at some point but its good going. -Dialogue is practical, could write more feelings meta on it to flourish the characters acts. -Status window all details again, Ok good no status window spamming, this is probl most balanced use of it what I have seen for a long time. -If you use missions/quest keep them open enough not to create tunnel vision for all the activities of MC. More of advice at this point.