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It's written very well, I don't need to reread sentences because they don't make sense :D. There's also no typical blabbering about the world that doesn't involve the MC, instead, it has a slight flavor to the story while still keeping it connected to the MC That's poggers :D I would have loved to see some trouble accepting the change in gender, but Alex just smiled it off and said. "I'm a woman, nice." And proceeded with his thing :D I like it a lot, so Happy reading fellow readers :D
As an author of this mess, I know that I’m giving it my all. But my inexperience can be clearly seen in this story, not to mention that my knowledge of the English language is also lacking. The biggest problem I have is the stability of uploading, its really stressful to follow the self set boundaries that I placed upon myself. So I'm giving myself a 3,6. Happy reading :D