ImperialCoffee
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2022-04-22 Se unióUnited States
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ImperialCoffee2hComentado porTo further disturb the prince, Ozai actually gave a reassured smile.- ImperialCoffee10hComentado por
Honnestly aangs and his groups naivety is annoying at times
Xing fixed the Avatar with a harsh glare. "When you've dealt with more in the world of politics and warfare, come back and say that again with all this naive honesty." - ImperialCoffee11hrespondió a OriginalkazukiZuko grunted as a growling mountain of fur and bone and meat slammed him into a tree and blasted the air out of his lungs. He blinked away the spots from his eyes as a sky bison barreled through the Fire Nation troops and knocked everyone clear of the Avatar, who then climbed up the beast along with the Water Tribe boy.
- ImperialCoffee12hComentado porDespite the haggard look, the ancient king was still grinning rather brightly as he nodded. "Yes, yes, I surrender… And I surrender Omashu to you as well."
- ImperialCoffee1dComentado por"There's trenches being carved out, and judging from how they're organizing their tents, we'll see walls up by nightfall."
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At least you want to improve, plus this time you did better with the greyfia thing than you did the necromancer one by at least giving the mc a chance for retaliation. (Also, sorry for all whining in that chapter. I thought the whole thing was gonna be a repeat of last time and got mad)
A/N: To clarify, I disliked how I wrote the Grayfia storyline in the original, not the storyline itself. I just felt like I went about it the wrong way and could have done way more with it. - ImperialCoffee1dComentado porIt worked, and it was highly effective.
- ImperialCoffee1dComentado por"Tell me honestly, general, how much would the Fire Nation stand to gain if we adopted this orphan? Or tie this commoner colonel to the royal family by…other means? Assuming he proves his worth, of course."
- ImperialCoffee2drespondió a jackson_smith
- ImperialCoffee2dComentado porChapter XIV: Rambling And 'Recruitment'
- ImperialCoffee3dComentado porCh 39 Chapter 39: Path of Domination
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Thanks for giving the mc a chance for payback. It gets annoying seeing the occasional mc being a complete pushover. It doesn't always happen, but it's annoying to read (especially if it happens frequently in the same fic)
Takumi looks forward to his revenge and new servant. Sirzechs was checkmated, he has no other option but to give Takumi what he wants even if he doesn't like to, he will do it for the greater good. - ImperialCoffee6dComentado porI had reached such a high level of bullshit, I no longer needed to purposefully torment those around me!
- ImperialCoffee7drespondió a lolbena
thanks
Once we were alone Minthara looked at me with some curiosity "What did you do?" - ImperialCoffee7dComentado porCh 285 Chapter XI: Dovahkiin
- ImperialCoffee7dComentado por
What did he do?
Once we were alone Minthara looked at me with some curiosity "What did you do?" - ImperialCoffee8dComentado por
Here have them
There have been rumors of a certain group of stone smugglers going around and avoiding the good lord's taxes. We assure you that these miscreants shall be brought to justice with immense promptness and prejudice and advise those not yet caught up in their criminal ways to keep your distance lest you be caught in the crossfire. - ImperialCoffee9drespondió a Aliya_GenesisCh 283 Chapter IX: Grabbing A Few Blades
- ImperialCoffee9dComentado por(The House of Dagoth does not guarantee the stones will reach their intended destination due to the previously established n'wah tax.)