Quite a good start. . i love the story development and the unexpected huddles in the way. And, I believe these huddles will make the characters stronger. Keep improving dear writer 🙃☺️💜.. .. [img=coins]

I only read the beginning and I got drawn to it.. .. I love the way you make the characters come alive in your readers heads, and that's some good technique. .. Please, pals check out my first book- SHANIA

Well, the book is interesting and I must say that I feel it should continue. I love the characters especially the protagonist...I love her resolve and determination about things she feels is right. I recommend this book to teens like myself.