the_one_and_oni

thanks for the pics dude sorry im so late to the party, though

it's kind of rushed well not my problem faster the kanto arc is done the better

oh and because he got the rainbow wing does that mean he's in the pokemon I chose you movie time line

I'm so sorry. im asking so many questions. It's annoying. I know I just time anything I think of so will Ash use arua if there's no system of anything? It's like the only way for him to be stronger than champions without lots of hard work 2 will bond phonanom be used because you need a stupid amount of arua to do it, that's why Ash could do it

I have 2 things to recommend 2 things to ask and 1 thing to beg just an opinion, but would it not be better to give the chapters names instead of 1, 2, 3 and the mc is ash a better ash, but ash, so should he be called ash in 3rd person and not the past name does pikachu look like the fat version or the good version and does Ash still look like an annoying kid or like the xy ash AND I BEG YOU PLEASE DONT ADD MISTY SHES HORRIBLE IN APPEARANCE AND PERSONALITY I BEG added this fic btw has potential sorry if a sound annoying please don't hate me

sorry its so long

looking good so far it's only chapter one so not much to say I have a few things I don't like but who cares its already written so can't go back and a few questions 1 you gonna make ash practice arua it's basically psychic but more special I guess in the pokemon lucareo movie it's said ash has just as much and the same type of arua as the greatest arua user in the world and 2 you gonna do pokemon horizons stuff or not if so I recommend doing it the same way pokemon radical relucks did in the later chapters

DUDE THAT WAS PEAK PERFECT YOU GAVE CHARIZARD SO MUCH PERSONALITY I thought ash was gonna give an inspirational any minute this one chapter was better then the only ash greninja arc in x and y so how exactly is bond charizard different from mega charizard I like to imagine bond charizard is purple instead of blue but is there any difference at all or is it just the same