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Endevor3 years agoPublicado porThe idea and setting sounds really good, the power appears unique. I feel like the writing could be cleaner though. There are time where paragraphs could be separated into two and where it get's hard to tell who's who when there's dialogue.
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The idea and setting sounds really good, the power appears unique. I feel like the writing could be cleaner though. There are time where paragraphs could be separated into two and where it get's hard to tell who's who when there's dialogue.