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You need to take into consideration that those are elves from all over the world and not only Great Britain. That way the number of house elves is quite acceptable.
If at all.
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HE IS NOT FUGING LOCKHART!
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Can you please stop insulting frogs/toads by comparing them with Umbritch.
I got goosebumps while reading the prophecy. Great work.
The stone only gives unlimited lifespan. It doesn't protect against external Danger.And Snape made an unbreakable vow to help Draco kill Dumbledore so no manipulating that.
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A very good fanfic. It is not something stereotypical like the mc being op (at least not yet) and is very smoth to read. The mc also, while still being nice, doesn't have a "hero" or "good guy" complex. I would dare to say it is even with so few chapters (at this point 11) a very good casual read.(please excuse any mistakes. English is only my secondary language.)
It should be "aqua eructo"