Honestly I forgot it, when I created the novel, in the first chapters there was no romance, so I didn't put it from the beginning, and then I didn't remember about it. Thanks for reminding me, I'll add it.

Yes, you're right, thanks for the correction.

Thanks for your comments. Happy New Year!

Yes, you are right, I don't know why I put that, I thought I had checked this part. I'm so sorry, I'm going to correct it.

If you mean on the system, it is not possible for Viktor at the moment. And if you mean buy outside, it is difficult to get guns at this point of the history.

Thank you for your comments, I appreciate it.

I'm really sorry and it was a typographical error, I meant to say mission, I thought I had checked well but I didn't realize it.

For the moment he focuses on these two, then raises them.

Yes, there is.

There are a lot of dialogues and thoughts in first person, but there are many descriptions as well.

No, there are a lot of dialogues and thoughts in first person, but there are many descriptions as well.

No, at least not in the main characters (Viktor and his family).In other characters I still don't have well defined it.

You can ask questions here, there may be some discreet spoilers in the answers, so read this only if you think it will not ruin your reading experience. In the other review posted by me, there are also answers that could have spoilers, beware.

The protagonist will not be evil, in fact, he tries in his own way to be "good", maybe he is not the ideal example of a "good" being, he is selfish but doesn’t want to do anything really immoral.

It seems an interesting novel of tragedy and romance, the situations lived by the protagonists seem difficult, and each chapter shows a little more of them.

Regarding the necromancer, he is quite a powerful character, perhaps a bit exaggerated if you are not used to this kind of story, in this world, there are wars that involve a lot of power. Obviously, he is not an initial character, but he is important in the story.

Thanks, I will try to keep your advice in mind for future descriptions of the world.

It's interesting, it reminds me of "A Song of Ice and Fire" in the first few chapters, despite having very different writing. The writing is good, and it has a nice feeling of suspense. The characters seem to have a good development. The weak point is that the update is not regular at the moment, but it can be improved. Cheer up!

It looks good and the writing is nice. It's a revenge fantasy and the characters have realistic points, which gives it a nice feel.

It's exciting. I don't really like the main character, but I like what happens to her. I think she can have a lot of development, and the story can progress to different exciting points. The writing is easy to understand.