Heya, If your wondering why theres a lack of chapters, I am gonna remake it when I finish writing my new novel, as I figured I need more experience to write this novels story

Like a wiseman once said "Before supporting others make a 5 star review of your novel"

Your a Lucky man mad xd

What the f*ck is that thumbnail...

Hello there! Hope you enjoy it, this novel really takes up a lot of my free time to write. But yet here we are, will have a mass release in a few months. But for now enjoy the daily uploads.

Check out my new novel, "GodKiller's Ballad" For the time being (Everlasting Magus) will be on hiatus, as Im gonna remake it in a year or so. But in that time hope you can follow my new work, there will be a mass release in a few months. Around 10-30 chapters

*Wanted

The characters are pretty cool and the chapters are mostly void of grammar errors other then some sprinkled round. The plot is kinda confusing but seems to be getting better. It is a pretty nice read.

I missed way too many opportunities to do so... But currently working on it, I think I only made Snake have a little bit of character

Also check out my novel If you want.

I see

It is a good idea but the execution is kinda lacking as the characters seem 1 dimensional because of the way they talk, it is an issue I also possess. You can shorten their sentences without adding extra words to make them fancier, it just takes a hit. Also, there was an unneeded use of advanced words when they could be more stable with basic-level words like "Smell and They" Also "was" being used in parts that could be avoided. Was is important but if you can change it for a better word you need to avoid it. Otherwise the plot was good as Im assuming this is one of your first novels, you will probably improve so good job. Ask me if you want me to review your later chapters, I will gladly check out your progress.

Nope its a singlefemale leaf

Probably at the middle

Singlefemalelead

I also did...

why does our covers look so similiar...hmmm? Did you perhaps use a rework on mine or did midjourney just give up.

I shall not my brother, I got like 3 colls from that xd. So I think it does not work

Heh

versatile superstar reference?