I'm so lazy and unmotivated that the stories in my head were not given justice. I hope i get through it!
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I'm starting to dislike this girl. It's okay to grumble inside your head if someone didn't help you. But to chastised them for not helping is such a spoiled kid behavior. He does not know you, you're not his responsibility and he's not obligated to help you. If he helped you then that's kind, but if not he's just not a gentleman and be done with it, it's not like he pushed you. Strike 1, if it reach three I'm dropping this
He's not indebted to help. Why do people expects other people to help you in times of need and get angry if they did not help. It's not their business. They are also not responsible to help you.
who the fuck says this is not harem book? He's a flirt okay and all women just helplessly falls for him. they're very indifferent to other guys but they suddenly got bold with him. This depiction of women turns off me. Another thing, there are so many filler chapters of random people and their fight scenes during the games that some aren't related directly to the MCs plight. The was unneeded, you can just summarize it in a paragraph or two, but the author just wanted to up the word count. Guess what, it's boring and annoying. Just imagine paying coins for 2 or three chapters that aren't related with the MC. Some of these characters end up dead anyway so why bother, we don't care about their lackluster fight scenes. It only made me sleepy and disinterested with the story. The characters also in the story are mostly annoying. I just don't like them personally. Lastly, the whole idea about games seems very unmotivating factor for me. He needed to become strong so he had to play the games for rewards, then again why does he wanted to become strong? So that he can play better in games? There's no greater threat or conflict. It could be more interesting if he hunted this materials in real life. Most of the time it's in the game and virtual world which gets old fast for me.
Thank you for this, this is really one of my turn offs in books. I really don't mind if a guy sleeps around as long as I sleeps around too. But a pure girl offering myself to a used guy? Haha no way. You get to eat different meat varieties but I'll just be left with leftovers? Call me prude, but I believe I deserve a chaste man if I'm pure myself. If I'm not pure then I'll not be hypocrite and deny a similar man for me. I'll always say this analogy to those who critic this view of mine. It's like I saw someone was eating a steak, they munch it in their mouth and spit it out, then the munch bits where shaped into a stake then cooked again then served to me. Guys, I'll puke.
I've read two books of Sorahana before this and I've stayed in it for quite some chapters till I dropped them. Most of the reason were despite how good she was at creating plot and interesting flow of the story those two books have so slow romance, I like slow romance but I have a limit to how slow it was and if I have already spends days reading it and the romance was not going anywhere then I'm dropping it. Which leads me in staying away from her books as I don't want to spend time for a book that I'll drop anyway due to her style of writing. Despite that, I still read this as I've quite interested with the blurb and it looks like it's more leaning in romance than in plot. I was wrong, Sorahana likes her plotting and I appreciate that but her comes the problem. The story has potential but it was made haphazardly. It felt like the author was lazy on giving more effort than usual and just made a poorly characterized, plotted, and flowed story. The characters are reacting inconsistently, the plot has so many holes and questionable logic. And it's boring. Why? Because there's nothing new. This trope is a common trope and she just basically made it as average as it is. Which is a shame as those two prior books I've read had some unique plots and explore more things and in depth things regarding the common genres. This one I think was just made so that the author can earn some coins.
If you're a veteran reader then this will only bore you. All of the good reviews here are all written by those who only read the first chapters of the book and are new to this genre. So cliche. The parents are stupid for no reason. Everyone seems to hate her. Everyone thinks she looks like a goddess for no reason. She knows everything and if someone ask her if she know how to embalm a dead body; cook a crocodile; or pilot a space ship, she probably can do it and be the expert of it. She always has this cold face that was just so old school that the author may think as cool. It's ridiculous. This type of novels was so common and copied that makes you asked of authors weren't tired writing this unoriginal stuff, are chinese people that much low level in writing?
Yes, so true. The first 200 chapters shows potential and I enjoyed it truly but I feel like the author either dropped his/her IQ from that onward or he/she was replaced by an impostor. There was a sudden shift from CH 200 onwards.
To be honest, this started good and it gave the impression that this was not written by a stupid author who just copies everything out there. It has logic, sense and stability in the first 200 chapters, I just don't know what happened after it. It all falls downhill in the entertainment arc. It started to feel dumb. It now became a face slapping scenes and it was not even made decently. There are moments that are cringey because they are highly unrealistic. Everyone started to be one dimensional character and the way they act and even their lines are looking the same. Some people don't even have distinct characters anymore. Like they are male but their lines and the way they speak sounds similar to those cannon fodder female characters. Also, the plot starts to convulate and be stagnant. There came the mistakenly exchanged kids trope and it was done very crudely. Just because someone saw that you look like their granma, they decided to do a dna. Its more like because they needed more plot armor for her. I didn't even know the reason why she has to be an actress when she's better at other things and she wanted to make money. Acting gives little money and it will took her 4 months to finish which is so OOC for her. She can use that time to create an empire, there's no legitimate reason why entertainment arc should proceed from this story other than the author has some wish fulfillment fetish to make her/his character famous and the only way she/he can think of was the dumb entertainment arc. I thought this book was smart and at least mature in its operation but I have a feeling that it change authors after the 200th chapter. It's sad, I at least was expecting a lot from this.
It's really a letdown. This book is overrated. The only reason I read this was because it has 4.8 stars which was a pretty high and reliable indication of a good book. So I read it without reading the reviews seeing it's obvious to be mostly positive. When I was reading it, I always had this urge to drop it. The translation despite being legible was confusing. The story itself and how it was written was also unclear, there are instances when you just don't get what was happening, it made me wonder if I left out some paragraphs or the translators forget to translate it, which was really not the case, it was just not well written. The characters are pretty bland and they hardly hook some interest in my reader viewpoint. So i decided to read the reviews back and then I saw how many negative reviews it has, which was unexpected seeing this was a 4.8 star novel. It really made me start hesitating the credibility of the ratings here in Webnovel. But as this was the first one so I hope this was an isolated case.
this was obviously a move from the author to increase chapters seeing her book was famous. Like she could have written another book or separate the two books like make a sequel where it was stated that this book is when she came back to her world.