Nikita_Ragimov

I think this is just chapter from baki with few additional words... Please continue!

Good. Like it.

Zouken died and that's good. Shinji's survival is a pleasant surprise. I just hope he doesn't turn into something like the original - Sakura could use a normal good older brother. All that's left is to somehow save Kiritsugu and life is generally good... Until everything obviously goes to hell again. (Nasuverse is not a place for "just" a happy life) Gilgamesh... here she doesn't seem as bad as in the original but the experience with Kirei... In general, Leo can be understood, but I personally hope that Gil turns into a cool/stern/arrogant/older sister for Kiritsugu's new daughters. That would be pretty funny) Oh, and yes! ZelRICH - damn you!) I hope he won't introduce Leo to his granddaughters... Arcueid is okay but that other one... That might be too much for young Leo xDD

Hell no. Wilhelm can't escape his "Luck" Even when he tries with all his might. Although I am glad how united the whole Will Group is shown. But the girl's Mother... Why the Greek Gods Again?! Why are they always so much trouble?! It's good that she didn't turn into some kind of beast to "take advantage" of Wilhelm. The Greeks (gods) love that. All we can do is wait. At least we can expect a fair ass-kicking for everyone who deserves it or just happened to be on the receiving end - that's what we love!

No, I've had enough. This story is killing my nerve cells. Relationships don't work like that. Just no! No one gets attached to others with such speed and force, regardless of their actions. This smells like blatant brainwashing or something like that. And the main character literally declared that he was going to hook all the heroines... I see where this is going and refuse to read further. Good luck to everyone who reads this and I hope you don't suffer from early Alzheimer's.

oh, the new main character saves everyone, charms everyone in a matter of hours and also goes crazy with fast power, blabla... What the hell? Why can’t stories like this develop without such toothless and plastic techniques? Is this how human relationships work? I don’t care about the harem, but when the main character is presented on a silver platter with everything that much more worthy people are tearing their veins apart for, it’s just funny! The whole fanfic is a piece of continuous disappointment. Powers from nowhere. Love of Girls out of nowhere. Praise of others for any "good" deed of the main character, none of which he did simply out of good intentions. I may be wrong, but the fanfic reminds me of another Chinese story but with characters from Anime. That's all. It is literally difficult for me to describe what is happening in the fanfic, since it follows the same paths, like almost any Chinese story. Only here the Main Character Absolutely does not deserve the benefits he received, since any of his achievements cost him almost nothing.

oh, the new main character saves everyone, charms everyone in a matter of hours and also goes crazy with fast power, blabla... What the hell? Why can’t stories like this develop without such toothless and plastic techniques? Is this how human relationships work? I don’t care about the harem, but when the main character is presented on a silver platter with everything that much more worthy people are tearing their veins apart for, it’s just funny!

Good. I was a little afraid for Kuroizawa, but everything turned out great. Thank you for the food.

... 13 years old? I was a dumb brick at 13 years old. Like I didn't know anything about life. nothing at all. Moreover, history. This guy is either a genius or he was forced to study a lot.

Well, this fanfic definitely doesn't deserve five stars. It's not that it's too bad, it's just... Empty? It's just a story about fulfilling your own desires, where the main character is... an asshole? Honestly, it's hard for me to describe him. At the time of the first half of the available chapters, mC does nothing but become stronger and make love (Like in porn) with his girls, whom he got in a few chapters with a small backstory and during half a year of timeskips. Overall, MC has no depth and the rest of the story simply doesn't make any special sense other than, actually, fulfilling desires. Reading for those who just want to kill time. No more, no less. As for grammar - read the first chapters and you'll understand everything. And yes, if you take away the powers of the current MC and leave him with average abilities within the Verse - he will be an absolutely gray and semi-intelligent background character, created exclusively for funny inserts. I think that's all.