Hope there some change in storyline, not just keeping the main story and mc "walking by". But logic and character development so far good for me, just need more chapters to read.

Good enough for me. just don't stop and add more new chapters

Why do I get the smell of AI?

you are too dumb to comprehend a thing or two without wikipedia. where you moron think the class division came from in india?

the magic of this novel. you can skip like 3 to 5 chapters and everything still goes well.

dumb start, but thats expected from imbecile with such naming

cant agree with you, lots of chakra doesnot mean autohealing. tsunade used it as storage and her being medic nin made the job. kishimoto is delussional idiot and there is lots of not explained things, like why kisame called biju without tails but in reality its all about samehada. as he lost the sword he just turned into a little bit stronger jonin.naruto geting healead is about kuramas chakra acting like programed "protect" code, so if there is a chance for naruto being killed- he gets biju chakra mode. if he is injured- he gets healed

you piece of idiot, that heard of romance from books and dumb novels, when people say childish, they mean the way no adult would behave, and too stupid to actually be a romance at all.

logic, oh dear logic, why did you leave us with this asian idiots alone. they just popped one day on this website like some smelly and disgusting tide. please come back and make them suffer, oh dear logic

the order of black....BRING THE MACHINE, we are going to quarter this racist scumb could not even finish first chapter almost drown in dumb things this idiot of author wrote

could anyone explain to me how come a story like this gets more than 2 stars for ratings? i dont want even speak about comedy tag which only lame joke makers add to their stories. just this mr.jimmy and mr.michael made me believe that i was right on thinking about nothing got to be good with such naming and usage of that third rate dumb thing, dont even remember what those shity series were called, something about shaving and razors

its not me, you dumb imbecile who bullshited in every possible way each chapter. point by point. did he or not write a novel where be nerfed an OP character like chrolo just for his stupid emo and little bitch self to wet himself on some cool villain? every fan of HxH would skin him alive and boil in oil so he doesnt ever think of taking precious time of readers. why the hell even add a character that wont be himself. he doesnot have his abilities, he does not have his way of making things, and i nearly vomited, so could not read it more than a chapter or two, so not gonna find what more this moron messed in this shity story if his. the other times i would recommend to grow a little bit and try again when he gets experience, but not in this case. he is too delusional to get himself called an author. even animals got more shame and reasoning than you two. speaking of your novel, did you make more fake accounts so could vote and get better ratings ?

of course you are not gonna answer to the last part, cause there is nothing to defy. if by any chance there were just a tiny attempt like making addition of unique power or even some system to ur novel, then readers would respect that try, but what about this shity novel? thousands of players and readers dont give a shit about it and you scream about the need for readers to know about one of them. so with so much dumbness im not surprised about idiocy that you wrote like "look for original stories if you dont like fanfics"

first of all there are not so much teen wolf fanfics, a shame of course, and i like teen wolf, but its not about series not being good, its about fanfic being shity. only one teen wofl fanfic is decent enough, and thats teen mage in teen wolf. we readers just hope its not droped and author gonna finish it

this review means you are utter dumb and have no respect for original authors. kaidou cant be more human, its his main point and reason to be part of one piece manga and anime. by the way, the things you said just sounds like things author of this shity novel says, so some suspicions about you being just another fake account of this dumb aurhor.

just another chinese dumb story. for the smart and wise part of this website, which is just 1% its a call to immediately close the page. and i dont need to explain what awaits you if decide to read. idiot of mc, just like author himself, with too op system and body. arrogant chinese chat talks, that makes you vomit at how illogical a being could be and no progress and intresting story development

another one with dumbness above roof. those chinese lines like "i remmember the best result being a something was 10 year old". like if mc cant become top from history the novel gonna be shity. no, of course the novels like this one always gonna be shity. the ones without uniqueness to mc, being without some otherworldly power etc. and the most of it? mcs in such dumb novels get to become "the youngest" in history but then encounter someone of same age in latter chapters who beat mc like some stray dog

oh great, an indian story. maybe im truly a racist but no matter what i cant overcome myself and respect people that lived under code of manu so reading indian story is a big no for me and every other lawer that got just a little bit trust in human rights.

another dumb imbecile thinking that its a piece of cake being an author. forget about shity translation and writing way, that only an imbecile would use, the illogical things that he wrote makes me doubt him being even a human being. more like some dog got his "hands"on laptop and in two hours wrote and published this crap on website. how can someone on serious note write about defending being more energy consuming than attacking. nowadays imbeciles are more skilled in faking votes than authorship

like i give a shit about chinese or racism. and if you think about something that was made for dumb imbeciles, cause only such people gonna spend more that half a second on this word. the smart and wise ones understand this term being for ruling stupid masses. the decent readers, the ones that read at least a few hundreds of novels would just vomit as soon as they see chinese catch phrases or things like sign in/ got exposed/ chat group and tons of things that you could encounter only reading a chinese authors story