Rafi_Uddin_3519

Just let the evil mc take over just cant bear to read the wimpy mc either merge them or just kill off the wimpy one ............................

this story had infinite potential but some how the author fucked up the story what a waste man any 3rd rate author could give great ideas for this book but no you had to fuck it up

you alive Author ?

Hello author i have no experience in writing but just a suggestion you should injure the mc a little so in the live stream his family may feel a sad and regret i know the mc is kind but i think his family should suffer with sadness and regret

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this novel is completed but don't read it it has the worst ending ever the son dies and the father's system is the villain and some how the father becomes the ruler of the universe because the son's wish made in the middle of the novel and it ends with the father crying