Sans_722

At first I saw a lot of potential in this story but I was disappointed by the quality of the writing and several things are exaggerated to a level that becomes annoying, seeming to be written or manipulated by an A.I.

+1

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So i give you all my power stone of tomorrow

Your chapters never disappoint author

Like the part where they call him a hero on the plane or when he sees the room with Igor and describes everything as if it had a great meaning but not once but several times, although other than that you have very good writing.

Although I see a lot of potential in the story, many parts feel exaggerated, like when an A.I. exaggerates and it becomes annoying at times.