Thanks for the Chapter

The first 10 chapters of this fanfic are truly impressive. I genuinely enjoyed reading them and I look forward to what comes next. Keep up the fantastic work, author-san! [img=update]

Thanks for the chapter

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First 2 chapters are actually good but in this chapter. There a lot of mistakes that I noticed, one of them is your grammars which js sometimes a bit off, I think.

Pretty good start, I like it.

Disculpa, gracias por señalarlo. Esta es la primera vez que escribo una fanfiction, así que todavía estoy aprendiendo.

Fue demasiado forzado?

That's what I also noticed yesterday when I was re-reading it so no need to mention it to me haha. Don't worry I actually planned to rewrote that part when I have free time.

Thanks to you I now have a better understanding of the difference between Clone Technique and Shadow Clone Technique since I did some research myself. This is what I've come with, The Clone Technique, is a fundamental ninja technique taught at the Ninja Academy. It allows the user to create illusionary copies of themselves, typically created for deception or distraction purposes. As for Shadow Clone technique, it is a more advanced and more complex version of the Clone Technique. It creates physical and tangible clones of the user rather than just illusions. Correct me If I'm wrong and with that I may have to do some rewritting on some chapters thanks.

oh yeah, I forgot their Japanese term. My bad, thank you for the correction.

My bad, I updated the tags, it should be transmigration and not reincarnation. Thank you for correcting, I appreciate it. :D

I'm still thinking.. for now my choices are either Karin or Ino but we'll see as the story progress haha.

Yes, Otsutsuki will exist in this fanfic story at some point.

Heeyyaa!! Author here, I just wanna say that this is my first fan fic. There may be some typo or wrong grammar. Please bare with it since this is my first time writing a fanfic and hopefully I would improved as time goes by. Additionally my updates might also take longer than expected since I'm a college graduating student so don't expect a regular updates thank you 😊.

ABD

i think this is a dumb move, considering that InoShikaCho is like a tradition. It's okay if it's only team 7 but naah..

Karin for FL!! and for the summon, I'd like to see him use Kashin Koji's frog. 🤣

Ignore them and just keep writing what you think is the best.

hear*