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As one comment pointed out, the romance feels rushed, and in my opinion, it was unnecessary. This fic is about building India and making India great. Adding romance in the middle of all this doesn't feel necessary. Like I said in the last chapter, the MC shouldn't tell anyone that he is reborn except Patel and Kao. You can edit the chapters and re-upload them. Just remove the romance, and it will be 100 times better than what you wrote.
Don't make indira or anyother a PM, vikram should step up and become PM
2 is best or maximum of 3 Scarlett Johansson / BlackWidow Elizabeth Olsen / Scarlett Witch Jenifer Lawrence / Mystique
I also hate when MC reveal he is reborn/reincarnation/timetravel bcz its not necessary in most scenarios, but in this scenario its not that bad, bcz both of them has same goal and that is to make India Great.
Why would you get hate for this chapter? For revealing that he's from future. He revealing a part of future to Patel is not that bad. As both of them said this Secret should be known only by two of them and maybe when Kao is going to die of old age like Patel then at that time MC can reveal, where he got his Knowledge from.
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