RayPrime

Menma's Rasengan would have been better.

then y didn't u edit it before uploading it

No

is this an mtl translation or translated from other language?

'An'is technically correct, as we are reading it M H A seperately we are pronouncing it as 'Em' a vowel like sound so, An is correct.

For the word count of these chapters, which is very low, the updates are bad. Not much character development, very passive MC, forced plot, has potential, could be improved. P. S. Dont make it harem and improve the writing, I will change the review.

what about Mahito's skills? didn't he kill him?

Nah, this is to increase word count

bruh even if he did save lyanna, he still let the war happen, what about the lives that are lost in it. and he saves elia and probably lyanna, for what bcoz they're nobles! ? , just for the favour that their families might owe him!?

oh the irony, he lets lyanna and everyone that is involved in the war die, and just because he saves elia martell we are supposed to rejoice?