leonhunter

I recommend this read. The plot is intriguing, with amazing action moments that are mind-blowing. unique writing style. keep it up........

This is an interesting story and good world development along with the characters, there are a few grammar issues but the author keeps on growing along side with the story. I highly recommend this

So far so goood 30 chapters down, your moving very decent writing and improvement I can tell the author has matured the longer he has continued writing keep it up..

A great jump start I can't wait 4 the next chapter

It's off for a fresh start to be truthful its moving at a steady pace and so why not follow can't wait to see where this goes. The characters are well introduced though I think they need more description