Dexter007

one of the best dragon ball fanfic but author can you not use the word fusion of this and that or perfect balance i think vegito especially should not think to much about being a fusion and he shouldn't be to much effected by the memories after all he has God perspective with his past life memories I get chima but not vegito

honestly the hyuga branch family issue very few stories actually try to resolve it but just because the main family has Hinata and hanabi the mc of the most story who mostly think with there dicks and spare the clan leader or main family neji and hizashi are shown in the anime like only they are branded as slaves at least they were given the leader position of branch family unlike the actual victim

This story has massive potential to be one of the best i just hope you won't have Naruto stay in konoha like it's slave he don't have any reason to serve it if you talk about his parents like kushina or Minato they are just the biological parent who would have given original Naruto birth he shouldn't have so called bond for someone who has imprisoned his girlfriend

many people say that it's not jiraya or Tsunade fault or all the bad things that hiruzen or danzo did is only there fault but jiraya and Tsunade both are also responsible because they have the power to stop these things but they didn't do it because they aren't the one that are effected directly

is it really necessary for almost every person the mc meet to underestimate him or just straight up insult him shouldn't he or anyone in the one piece world who has conquer haki radiate a passive danger aura or something

we still don't know about mc total power level

tfc about jiraya if you think about his actions of training nagato etc its okay to train them but it's not okay to leave them after training them he should have them join konoha

this one actually is better because it shows that the mc actually has talent to grow strong even without pocket dimension help with nawaki body in many fanfic in which other reincarnate into Sasuke or Naruto body it's like they somehow forget about the massive potential to grow strong that just by having there body they can get

one of the best story about marvel x Naruto with mc with realistic value so far after all why would he treat character in Naruto world like a simp and care about there opinion just because he saw them in tv or manga anyway I hope that author would keep the mc mindset this way throughout the story his character development may seem rushed a bit for someone interacting with Naruto first time but it is how it should be for a person from our world to reincarnate in another

one of the best story mc character and personality is also good his thoughts about Naruto is also spot on why should he care about the opinion of the people of Naruto word to him it is a fiction world that has become like a dungeon like in solo leveling marvel relationship i get it because he has actual relation with stark and has many years to come in term about it being a former fictional world