Rzora

Hey guys, Rzora speaking! Usually authors would give their own work a 5/5. But personally I don't think my work is good enough for that. I may change it, if I deemed it worthy enough of a 5/5. But honestly speaking there only barely any chapter for you to based your opinion on. Anyway I want to flesh out more of the power system and wolrd building without spoiling to much. So first, "What the story about?": A rats of society, someone one who no longer have a place come back, Aeter (short for Aeternum, which is Latin for eternity, lazy I know), and his mysterious sister Kaula. Followed his path to discovered the hell inside everyone of us with his own hell that nobody can never hope to understand. Yes this story contained some or a lot of philosophy. I will have to read a lot of philosophical book for this. "What is Mark?": Mark is a manifestation of one's being, Mark will grow along side of the user until one day it will be awaken through strong emotions such as fear, happiness, sadness,... usually the cause of an "Awaken" is trauma, *wink* *wink* "How is the world building?": Currently when I'm writing this there not much chapter so I didn't delve much into world building yet. But as a fan and a readers who was fascinated by LOTM insane world building a lore. I also want my to world to be as real as LOTM. "Writing quality": Yeah it kinda bad right imo, but it certainly will improved, just need some experience... I hope. "Will there be love interest?": Yes! Three to be exact, no it's not incest, and yet Aeter an Kaula are 100% blood related and I'll never change that. But I do plan 3 different love interests with different personalities and story and not based their entire personality on the fact that they loved the MC. "Will it be a harem then?": Heheheh, Not sure, *wink* *wink* Honestly there not much going on right now but my plan is that to make a novel where I can enjoyed by incorporate all the part I like about novels. So if any of my plan does not to your liking, then it's fine everyone have their own reference. Though I'm sure some of the plot I have in mind will change over time but all that I said in here would still be valid in the official work... unless I want to be trendy and give Aeter a system with a 20 girls harem or something. Anyways, Rzora, Peace!

At least she and Faith have something common they both love shinies (normal shinies and Diablo's shinning abs)

now kiss

That is a very oddly specific number

Where shinies?

Very poor choice of words

Just barge in someone's office and fucking sole their first kiss. What a chad.

No, no no no no no. Don't you dare raise the freaking flag Adel.

Ah, classic Adel

Relatable... Been there feel it. Not the Princess part.