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I liked the second and third idea, the first idea makes me think that it will be a "slice of life" but I find it strange that it is a "slice of life" of ninja characters, a work full of action, adrenaline and risk of death, in addition Furthermore, with Tsunade, this would be very difficult since she is an important figure in the village. As for your third idea, I would find it interesting but only if she had some kind of ability like Tang Lian's to grow an artificial *****.
First my objective opinions, good writing, coherent characters, original and interesting ideas, engaging plot and personality villain, I really liked this story and I can totally see this happening in the series, I think the characters are even more mature and experienced than in the series, the only negative I can think of in this story would be how the power levels and power ups are not very clear, but that really was never very clear even in the original TV series itself, so thank you for the wonderful story.
I agree, like, if you want to write bonds between father and daughter so much just get Kushina pregnant soon, Naruto could end up a little overshadowed but honestly I'm too lazy to read rewritten chapters and there are scenes that are much better to write in Naruto, won't it be so cute but I think it will probably be less superficial.