Night_rains

Well I don't know what to say about this work!! * First of all, the work is averagely well-written. The characters are good (average) * The character of the hero is very good, he is not a prostitute who wants to save every life and he is not a disgusting devil, but in the middle he maintains his humanity with a kind of independence - and this hypothesis about making the hero immortal is very beautiful. * The relationships in the work are very good, especially the relationship of the hero with his friend Bai, which was very realistic * Also a simple thing: The writer's portrayal of capitalism caught my attention very beautifully in "Rogue Farmer" who needs to work thousands of hours day and night to pay off the debts of agricultural resources and land that contains high energy, The desire is strong to reach the top with a hair of false hope of reaching it that he does not realize. A person only after reaching the end of life and then tries to save what he can, this realization that occurs at the end of life, whether in taking on debts or buying luxurious things in imagining a fake vision of the world "We have let Dongfu exploit us most of our lives, so we cannot let our grandson suffer." * The time travel was smooth and very wonderful… it does not move between hundreds or thousands of years in an illogical way, but the travel was logical and very beautiful. You feel that it is not happening, it is between 20 to 90, so you realize the line of events. At first, I felt that it was bad, but then I realized that it was logical. I started to like the writer’s method, even if I needed to be patient with some somewhat heavy events. * The power system was good. The writer used the familiar power system, as well as the hero’s strength and his cheating. It was good and did not destroy the basis of the story - it gave him immortality and then made his talent very weak. * One of the things that I did not like was the abundance of useless events. The writer tells a lot of events. In the end, the hero goes and disappears for 50 years, and those events become worthless. This is repeated throughout the novel, and the issue is due to the writer not having any events to present. There were two options: either to make the number of chapters small, or to make these events valuable so that they are not just meaningless trivialities, or to have the hero enter them. I am sure that if the hero had been present, it would have been the least enjoyable thing, and I think that many left the novel because of this, because I myself could no longer complete it because of him. * The presentation of the world was somewhat reductive for a moment, you feel that the world is like a village, which shows the writer's weak skills, but it is excused because it is his first novel - if he had taken a few chapters to describe the world better than that stupid stuffing * A little nationalism was not disturbing, it helped the Communist Party win over the Emperor -- •• The novel is quite good, enjoyable in many ways, however, it has fatal flaws, which may not be tolerated by everyone

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The same TRACH, zero creativity, not different in anything from its predecessors Like 12 novels of this same theme already? Like holy shit...

I read many like it, we wish something different this time

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A good chapter also because of the great similarity between your work and reverend insanity I always compare them, but your exploitation of the past of the hero since the beginning of the seasons is human

Nice, this is the first difference between your work and reverend insanity I have expectations and anticipation for this work